Feedback and Rewrite

Last week you submitted a paper on “success in college.” This week you will have a chance to use your self-evaluation skills along with the instructor’s feedback to rewrite that paper.

Make a new copy of your W4 assignment (rename the new copy so you still have the original copy of the W4 assignment).

Here’s what you need to do:

1.Record yourself (either audio or video) reading the paper out loud. As you read, make a note of errors that need to be corrected (misspellings, typos, improper word choice, poor sentence construction, etc.). This recording will only be viewed by the instructor(s) at Grantham University. These will not be publicly available.

2.Review the feedback provided by your instructor in W4. You will need to include those suggestions into your rewrite. Make corrections in your paper using bold and italics (together) to indicate the changes your instructor suggested in the feedback from last week’s paper.

3.Use the default yellow highlighting color in Microsoft Word to indicate changes from your own self-evaluation of your work.

You will attach both the recording and the Word document to the assignment dropbox (do not type directly into the dropbox).

In addition, this week’s assignment requires you to upload a video. To assist you in recording and uploading the video, here are three different tutorial documents – you only need to choose one (so if your first choice does not work, then you have other choices).

Blackboard Video Upload Tutorial

Google Dropbox Tutorial

YouTube Video Upload Tutorial

Remember to include the following information at the top of your paper:

Your First and Last Name

GID Number

GU101

Today’s Date

View your assignment rubric.